I thought I loved him
and I thought he loved me
But that all changed the day that she
came into our lives
I had known him forever it seemed and she just appeared
him, of course swept by for 'looks'
He and I were friends and I told him
what I really felt
He was like, "Alright"
and left it at that, as if nothing happened
Which of course nothing did, but in my mind
when we tickled each other it was magic
but now that she is in the picture
that is down the tubes
So now he and her are "going out" and it pisses me off
because I feel that its my fault
I introduced them to each other
why could'nt he just like me?!
I love him
can't he see
I want to hold him tight
and love him with all my might
But of course that will never happen
because he is with her and I am not
She and I are "friends" if you want to call it that
I think she stabbed me in the back
She knew I loved him and took that all away
she even tryed to hook us up but
Of course she got him instead of me
So now I don't really care about her
Whenever she talks about him (which is always) it
gets to me bad, I want to scream
"Shut up! I know this already! I loved him first." and then storm off
but no, I can't do that
So, she got the guy and I have noone now
she always asks for my advice on what to do
I want to tell her crap and all but
of course i can't becaue we are "friends"
So much for this relationship
so much for this friendship
I lost my faith that day
thinking I still might have that chance
But now I know
that day will never come for Me
Author notes
This happened to me recently. I loved this guy who i have known forever and my "friend" just came and took him even though she knew and now she is a pain in my butt asking me all these questions so yea. Hope you like the poem.
Please tell me what you think
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Thank you. I'm happy you like my style of this.
It is/was intene and hard to come by to write but I did it and feel good -
Cool style to it..
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No problem what so ever! I completely understand this is not what you were looking for. I will go back to the contest and try again. Thank you for your comment though.
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nice
This is really nice, so please don't be offended when I say that this is not what I was looking for in this contest. I will update the contest page to give a better idea of what I am looking for as I see how you were confused. If you would like, you can remove this and enter another. And like I said, please don't be insulted. I love this poem and the thought is great. I just kinda wanted happy poetry for this contest.
Please don't be discouraged to try again.
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Thanks Ro! Your the best, ya I wish you were here too
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I'm sorry sis. If I was there i would kick the girls but for ya. lol..this was a very good and emotional write. Great job!
Ro -
Thank you so much for your comment
I will take your advice, I have been trying to get over him and she and I try to be honest with one another but its hard. lol
Thank you again
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hey
hey great poem i now how u feel, it happen to me once but keep ur head and do what i did i gave up on lookin for a guy and boom just in like 2 months of given up i found a guy perfect in every way better than my friend i was madly in love wit so keep ur head up and if u hate ur friend for takin him its better to tell her how u feel and shit and if he was that important than give up on ur friendship but if he anit that important then i believe u can find a way better guy... thanxs for sharing the poem i like it it got to the point of ur feelings -
Thanks! If you think this is good you need to read some of my first poems I put on here. Its about the same guy!
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This is sooo sad...I'm sorry.
I absolutely hate when "friends" backstab..maybe one day I will send you a list about friends that I have.
But I love this poem! True stories usually make pretty darn good poems. Excellent write sis!
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