Everything is full of emotion today
Now the tears are flowing freely
Drying them won't do, for they'll continue
Letting them flow and filling this ocean
Each one was spilled for a particular reason
Stinging and painful...they'll continue to flow
Something flowing from my eyes, are these endless tears
Tears that will have to cleanse and comfort me
Especially when there's nothing else remaining
A mix of emotions and the heartaches build up
Right now, the eyes are welled and flowing freely
So let me cry my endless tears, for I miss you
A contest entry
- ~~CRY,CRY, CRY~~ by Sweetangelgrace.
470 points, ended March 13, 2007, 14 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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It straight touched my heart!
Well done this poem is great and im sure that alot of other people would have been touched by this poem just like i was...
I can understand how you miss someone...and we cry but it's also helps us return to a calm state.
Good luck in my contest!
~~GRACE~~ -
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Very emotional piece...gets into the heart of the reader and gives them insight into your sadnes....such a wonderful job here into your feelings..smiles..Love, Terry
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Don't Cry No More
open up you're eyes look unto the skies open up you're heart and never feel apart the feelings you once shared can never be compared by the one you love . lost emotions and locked togeather , i know there can be know one to fulfill the joy and the years but look ahead and don't look back and seek what you desire , it may be there waiting for you tomorrow and forever
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