There once was a prince, and they called him Prince Chubby
He was a happy boy of 11, until the king wished him to marry!
But all the pretty young princesses across the land
Said Prince Chubby was fat and his manners they couldn't withstand!
Prince Chubby was so very, very sad, for lack of a wife made his father mad.
Then one day to the castle came a breathtaking beauty, Princess Anne!
She was so polite and so lovely, but nothing so special to Prince Chubby.
'Til as they were eating, to his great suprise,
Princess Anne let out a blech that widened his eyes!
"You aren't so bad! In fact you're quite gruesome!"
And with Prince Chubby's poor manners, they made a great twosome!
THE END!
Author notes
I went a little over 10 lines, but I tried hard!! I hope you'll forgive me, and I hope you liked it!!
A contest entry
- Silly Fairy Tale Fun :) by singer in the rain.
550 points, ended March 19, 2007, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - FAIRY TALE CONTEST!!!!!!!! by Sahlili20.
450 points, ended April 10, 2007, 23 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Amusing and Cute!!
Haha!!! I'm commenting while on university break now...and it put a smile to my face!!!
Thanks so much!!
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Haha! Awesome
Thank you for entering my contest!--sahlili20 -
i STILL love this
wonderfully
lovely
beautifully
charmingly
laughingly
enjoyably (is that a word?)
divinely
exquisite
piece of artistic funniness! lol
;P
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Abolutely clever and sweet!
Would make a child laugh and clap her/his hands and be glad to hear... makes a swell bedtime story! 
So smart, you are! 
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Ohhhh, this was fabulous! ! ! LOL, I absolutely fell in bubbles with this one ! ! I would clap with glee, but I fear, that would be going overboard, LOL! So fun ! !
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its great!!
lol it is sweet and funny. you were right, i do like it. it made me smile. good job bud!
christian
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an interesting humorous poem- 'prince chubby' reminds me of the little 7 month old boy i babysit, lol.. he is so chubby and cute. anywho.
good luck in the contest!
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HAHAHAHAHHA. thats GREAT! perfect for my contest! and what a great little fairy tale in general
i think i shall have to meet this prince chubby! thanks a ton for entering my contest!!!! && much luck
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