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Nothing is Forever

 

Listen to the cadence of tear laced breath,

regret the foolishness of childhood parries.

My mind racing in midnight desperations,

delectable sensations of reality obscured.

Immersed in a salty lake of longing,

drifting through tall blackened reeds.

Entwined in my contrite weakness,

blinded by prickling teardrops.

Heed questions from oblivious mouths, 

their words untainted sanctuaries.

Lost in a forest of dieing trees,

blaming me for their suffering. 

Broken dreams stand like shadows,

survivors who wish they were dead.

My mistakes, bitter lessons, 

learned on streets to nevermore.

Find the last pinch of strength

unconquerable faith in prayers

Wishing trees bring slow change,

on breezes caressed by fantasy

Sorrows ecstasy says goodbye.

 

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  • Riftkin gold member
    July 27, 2007
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    This is great as your trophy shows. You have a way with words that puts mine to shame.


  • Hated.
    July 27, 2007
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    thats good.. really good... i love the words you used and i like it in general


  • sweethelper
    March 10, 2007

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    i loved it !! the words are just fantastically used !! thank you so much for entering such a wonderful write in my contest ! i wish u the best in the contest! , your well wisher, -truthwriter-


  • riccadeana
    March 7, 2007

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    This is a very emotion piece and well put together. Loved every bit of it. Keep up the good work

    Listen to the cadence of tear laced breath,
    regret the foolishness of childhood parries.
    My mind racing in midnight desperations,
    delectable sensations of reality obscured.
    Immersed in a salty lake of longing,
    drifting through tall blackened reeds.
    Entwined in my contrite weakness,
    blinded by prickling teardrops.

    Good luck