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Ya Never Saw

I refuse ya abuse and ya excuses
Ya spoiled and useless at heart
Ya failure to accomplish
Ya mother calls it procrastination
I call it laziness
Hanging on to ya expectations
While denying my expectations
Criticing my defiance
My only weapon
Yet I hang on and so on
While you carry on
Without change
My mind deranged, estranged
As you proclaim
The blame is mine
Ya never saw the tears falling
Danger, danger
How much are you willing to lose?
… It all!
The woos are null and void
Get a clue
I’m to annoyed
Treating me like toy
Ya mama’s boy
How coy
Ya on ignore
Drawing the battle line
I make the bugle-call
My heart
Ya punching ball
You a brick wall
Standing tall
Wanting me to fall
Ya never saw the tears falling
Ya never saw the love dying
Lying, lying, lying
As ya trip over every blunder
No wonder are strangers
Consumed in anger
Loving you a chore
Ya bore
Please …
Save ya kiss of peace
Just cease
Don’t bother to assist
I can’t resist this need
To be loved
Unloved by you
Yet you presume too
As I struggle to find, see, feel it
Ya never saw the tears falling
Ya never saw the love dying

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  • Sam-a-nantha
    March 16, 2007

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    I didn't listen to this. I didn't think it would be fair. However, I want you to know that I have every intention of hearing it.
    This poem not only sounds great read aloud in front of my audience, but it looks fabulous on paper. It's fit for anyone to read!
    You have a rare and precious talent. This is a great poem! Keep up the good work!