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Alone?

In this place I'm a freak
Is it me or this atmosphere?
Acceptence is all I seek
but I see that is nowhere near

I know I"m not alone
yet still I'm on my own
How can this be?
What's wrong with me?

I just want to look
you straight in the eye
not from the ground or the sky
-just straight in the eye-

I feel like an outcast
an exception to normalcy
How long will this last
until this prison sets me free?

I know I'm not alone
yet still I'm on my own
How can this be?
What's wrong with me?

I just want to look
you straight in the eye
not from the ground or the sky
-just straight in the eye-

I'm scared 'cause I'm weird
I'm what people feel
I just want to feel at home
where I'm not diseased
festering with fleas
show me that i'm not alone!!!

Author notes

Anyone who says homosexuality is a choice..
is stupid.

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    April 9, 2007

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  • ForeverJenn
    March 29, 2007

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    Amazing!

    Hey!! I'm finally commenting! YEY! But yes. Homosexuality can be a choice. But those are mainly the people who are confused and stupid. Mostly it's not a choice. But Ive read alot of research on homosexuality and the brain patterns. It's pretty interesting.

    Ah..but to the poem. You are an amazing writing. I would like to hear some of your Poems/lyrics with music. Are you entering that poetry slam thing at parkwood?? I know you better be..so what poem are you using??

    But anyways.. You are not alone!! You're the koolest person ever!!
    And I ♥ you!


  • Crimson Ember
    March 10, 2007

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    Even after reading this in 2nd period, Victoria, it somehow seems better the second time around. And you're right. Anyone who does think that homosexuality is a choice IS stupid.