You don't know why
But tears don't lie
When they hit the floor
You weren't there
To show you care
As they fell some more
You weren't my rock
I heard no knock
Waiting at my door
Tears don't lie
They only die
To memorys
of what for
A contest entry
- ~~CRY,CRY, CRY~~ by Sweetangelgrace.
470 points, ended March 13, 2007, 14 entries
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very sweet and sad. tears don't lie... but when do they end? and when they go on so long that you no longer know what for.... what then? beautiful read. thank you.
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This is a very powerful write you penned here dear poet well done best of luck in the contest
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Nice piece of writing!
oh well.. what you have just said is entirely true.. i am a very emotional person so once in a while i have a tear strung face... ahahhah... but well.. tears have different meanings and they are expressions of your soul....
i get emotional and teary even while reading a very good book...
i guess everybody does cry even though some just won't show it.... its natural....because tears can't lie!
Good luck in my contest!
~~GRACE~~
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Thanks Grace
I bet I could write something pretty cool from this title.Would make a good contest.
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Fantastically said! and spoken in truth! Good luck in the contest!
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I Cry
When I think of you
and all the things
we will never do
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This is awesome!!! Great Job! I love it and it is true to an extent!!
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Awesome entry for this contest...so worthy of gold..smiles, Terry
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Yourv too kind
just a 3 minute write for the practice.
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