that dress that you flaunt today
was mine yesterday
and i wore it better
i can't believe that i lent it to you
we used to hate the wannabes together
now you love them by yourself
the hug i gave you yesterday
has turned in to a fist on edge
you ruined my life
with all of you selfish desires to make people see you
but i was always there
my hate was only a blossom
but the constant humiliation and inner rage
watered it to the extent
that you should watch your back
because revenge is a flower that takes less time to grow
A contest entry
- Hate Me, Kill Me by thorlorn thanatos.
380 points, ended March 30, 2007, 102 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Write About Friendship by Avalanche.Echo.
300 points, ended April 7, 2007, 14 entries
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i really like this poem! good luck in the contest
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I liked this a lot, and can relate. But I don't see outright which option this falls into, please tell me?
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wow
well written i injoyed it it reminds me of my friend andrew and i -
I like it
its hatred and pain all together... two facedness to the topps? methinks anyways
Well, its good
good luck -
this poem describes SD so well!! love how you said you were going to get revenge!
this was nicely and emotionally written! muy bien!
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