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Roses Are Red, But You Suck Big Time

Dearest Attack of Nervous Anxiety

How dare you choose your own life over madness?
I would have brought you coconuts and iced maracas
Solitary penguins with top hats, as well as poster-boy bottle openers
Really, is this act of rebellion justified?
'Very well', the scissor-shaped printer says...

Do you find it bizarre to have a succubus reach into the abyss
And find a pair of talking pyjamas doing the hoky-koky?
Do you find it in the least bit odd to have my belly button
Remove itself and eat a hole in good fortune?
If you do, then I'm afraid you're madder than I am...

So Nervous... can I call you Nervous?
Dispite how I feel inside, I find it must be imperitive
That you rescue me from the idyllic peace-making machine
You need to make things right, come on, you know how it is!
Remove the frantic testicles that are glaring at me from the wall!

You must remember how things used to be
Ah, the days you would stop for a day and turn things around
Remember the foot stool, the cheesecake, the rubber duck
And how you put it all together and made it a hallucination?
Those were the days... come on Nervous, please come rescue me?

Sigh! I breathe a sigh of relief!
The head of my pin tells me I need fear no longer!
He can tell you are swiftly on your way...
On your way to release the fever!
I can feel it, yes!

Sincerely yes,
Passenger Darling on the Rescue Boat Psychotica

Author notes

Written on 7th March 2007 at 17:22 GMT

I am an absolute fruitloop, living in a bread basket.

Oh yeah, and I found this in the dictionary...
scream·ing mee·mies npl
an attack of nervous anxiety

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    March 11, 2007
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    OMG! LOL Great one!


  • FlyingXDaggers
    March 11, 2007
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    this is a funny poem, very creative, random, and full of attitude


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    March 10, 2007

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    I just dont know what to say about this piece. left me speechless lol i dont know if tahts really a good thing lol. Great flow best wishes to you poet.
    Vsutton


  • BleedingWords
    March 7, 2007
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    wow thats weird...