My heart has brought me
At the complete state of destitute.
I knew not
That there will be pain
And I’ll be in the reign of sorrow.
But even if I knew
That the moments of bliss will be few,
I would have come here
Without any fear.
Because my life is with you.
Even if it is surrounded by sorrow
Life seems life only with you.
And I know
That there will be nothing left in life being parted from you.
With you I can see myself alive
Without you there will be no life.
Though I know
I’m nowhere in your dreams
Only your glimpse
Can make my life blissful than dreams.
You don’t think of me even once.
But whenever I think
I sink
Into your memories.
May be it’s true
I’m nowhere in your heart.
But you are the beats of my soul.
So I’m feeble
In the hands of my heart and soul
To love you and only you.
A contest entry
- Light - I want feel your JOY!!!! by Grey Mouser.
425 points, ended March 10, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Contest to Promote my Commenting ANYTHING GOES!! by Timeless Wisdom.
800 points, ended August 6, 2007, 261 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I loved your poem. I could totally understand what your saying in it. Life is nothing without him. Awesome job!
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Thanks a lot for feeling my poem and commenting on it.I'm glad you loved it.
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Congratulations on winning the honorable mention
keep up the good work.
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To feel so powerfully about one soul that tis is the joy felt is something to behold. Yet not having that come back to you brings a deep sorrow. Thank you for entering into the contest.
Be well and be blessed,
Mouser -
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Thanks for so much appreciation. I feel honored having this appreciation and of course the trophy.
thanks again. God Bless You.
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