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The road

One solitary man,
trying to cross the road;

but the road is wide,
and the traffic rages like a swirling typhoon,
and the lights are always red,
on the journey to the promised land,
that waits across the road,
past the fast flowing river of traffic;

and so he kneels down,
and prays to God to deliver him;

but just at that moment, a thundering hummer pounces,
and he's pinned to the floor by the thunder of bass from the stereo,
as is
   
shot

in the headlights

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  • Nature Song silver member
    March 26, 2007
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    Interestinly sad, very descriptive is style and format. Keep up the good works. ~Sie

  • Liquid memories
    March 17, 2007

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    Wow,

    sounds like a sad ending for the solitary man trying to cross the road. guess he never made it. Good job.