I cried for you I cried for me
I cried at what the world could be
I cry because you couldn't stay
I cry because you died today
I cried last night because I thought
I remembered all the lies I bought
I cried last week to watch the news
I cry to see my child's bruise
I cry to release my angst and fear
I cried because I need you near
Sometimes I cry because you see
I cry because I feel empty
So many losses in this life
I cry to express my strife
So many times I wish I could
Sit and cry just like you would
And then the well of tears would dry
Until again my heart would cry
In a list
A contest entry
- ~~CRY,CRY, CRY~~ by Sweetangelgrace.
470 points, ended March 13, 2007, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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crying is the best thing you can do to release tension and angst! this was AWESOME!
WELL DONE MY BABY GIRL!
luv dan
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STOP MAKING ME CRY!! It's hard enough that i'm leaving....and now i'm crying again bc this is too good...
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You know...usually to see/read words repeated in a redundant manner such as this makes me cringe. But this...is excellent! It is sad how the heart cries. There are so many reasons why. You listed them with artistic flare! I wish you the best in this challenge.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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I thought your poem was really sad and nice!
I agree with what you said. but it is a really really good one though and it explains what most people go through...
Good luck in my contest!
~~GRACE~~ -
Man, didn't know someone could cry so much. jk
This to me, sounds like every reason in the book to cry. How the world could be, emptiness, foolishness, death, etc. You got 'em all girl!
Now, excuse me...I need to go cry
sis
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Blue that is really good. You do know how to use your rhyming sceme and you use it well. Good luck in the contest.
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awww....amazing how and when we release that salty liquid huh?? Loved the last line..."Until again my heart would cry" Ultimately thats what happens huh?? The hear wells up until it cannot take anymore...sadness tinged with this...very descriptive...and emotional...Good luck!
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