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Next of Kin

She sits and waits
Patiently
The moon embraces her
She weeps
Silently

A love
So deep within
Just one more time
(She whispers)

Hatred stemmed
From so long ago
How many times
Must they break her

Sister, Brother, Father, Mother
Your hatred
Torments her

And she's left
Weeping again







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  • Heavenly Star
    March 12, 2007

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    This is such a sad and emotional write you penned here dear poet. Well written and good luck in the contest


  • honey bear
    March 12, 2007

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    a very deeply sad and emotional write my friend
    keep up the good work all these feelings coming out in the writing is a way to help heal


  • Sweetangelgrace
    March 8, 2007

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    I really liked this poem. It touched me in a special way.It brought tears to my eyes,you have so much talent and touching words.
    Good luck in life and thanks for entering my contest!

    ~~GRACE~~

  • bluecollarlove
    March 7, 2007
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    Ladys before gentelmen

    I will settle for silver for you are golden