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Rocks Erode

I am your rock
I like that

I enjoy the feeling of being the protector
Even if only as someone you can depend on to be strong

Protecting you from feelings

I have always been there for you
And will continue to be

Always and forever
Through thick and thin

But even Superman fails sometimes

What will happen when I encounter my kryptonite?
Will I fall from grace?

In your eyes, will I become no better than Clark Kent?
Nice guy, but weak and not reliable

Will I still be your Superman?

Author notes

This was just some random thoughts floating in my head, and concerns.
If you enjoyed this piece, be a Superman, either by being a rock, or by
coming to someone's rescue, or simply by heating their cold coffee with
your heat vision.

Phrozen

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  • Yemassee gold member
    November 1

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    Being looked up to means that we are expected to live in a certain way, react in a certain way. When we fail, the pedestal crumbles. Hopefully people understand that the person is human and a fallible creature.


  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    March 7, 2007

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    Truthful....

    I totally understand.....great use of metaphors....'
    As humans,we are totally vulnerable.....but we try to maintain our strength in public and such....

    I enjoyed reading it!

    • Phrozen
      March 7, 2007
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      Thanks hun. Sorry I havne't been around, you need to msn me!

      Phrozen