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Music is

Music is

~.~

walking in
to the bar stool
smiles hidden
in eyes glaring
up midnight skirts

fickle winsomeness
off sizzling tongues
ardent for euphoria

and pellets
of rolled up
flower petals
shoot off and rain
to blossom in thought

~.~

full face pulled hard into the microphone
fists clenched up to icy nights
and the sea of minds that stands in her shade
make hums of ancient wakes

full moon eclipse horizontally seen
like a list that lists and lists and lists
following the hills and bounding through caves
to walk over waters, reach the same

~.~

here,
hear
a heart 1@#@
frumping @!@#@
stunned
    %@$!
  wilting
/@#4/
      forced @@*$% donned (##)
    fast to the grasp
  -----@#
    and tender "}@#
      fazed ~!@# behind !!!!!
 
then sprung $#^%*&
loved @#
heard (( @@ ))
stirred $@%&*
but free    !@ %@% ~ # ~ ^* @!#  @! &$!  ! 1

tune does it
for me

@





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  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    March 7, 2007
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    I am not sure....is the code supposed to have made icons?


  • naikipet me
    March 7, 2007
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    wow i absolutely love the last part.... makes my heart beat fast you know.