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Poetry

Hey whats up
Me not much
Thinking of somone
Maybe thier touch

Writing some poetry
Letting words fly
Hey better than just lying
On your pillow to cry

Some of my compositions are happy
Some sad
But hey we all have our days
There will eventually be some bad

This was a quick write
Even though not the best
But hey I don't care
We all need a rest


Please tell me what you think

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  • Cherokee
    March 7, 2007
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    cute... try not rhyming... it's so much less inhibiting... and I bet you would love it.


    • Cmm
      March 7, 2007
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      well some of my other poems dont rhyme..I go back and forth.For some reason rhyming makes the writing easier for me.thanks for the comment


  • shay222
    March 6, 2007
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    to be a quick write i honestly thinks it was aweasome lol


    • Cmm
      March 7, 2007
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      Thanks so much! My friends hate it,but i will be talking to them in a chat and they will say something that sparks my creativity and I just start writing..usually no more than 8 lines and send it to them..they are always like HOW DO YOU DO THAT!?!? lol