Once upon a time
There were three little cats
And each of these cats had ten different hats
And each of these hats were covered in gnats
Which really attracted a whole flock of bats
And the biggest bat that ate all the gnats
Was forever then known as the big bat named fats.
The end.
Author notes
hope under 10 lines is ok
In a list
A contest entry
- Silly Fairy Tale Fun :) by singer in the rain.
550 points, ended March 19, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow
this is really cute i think u did a great job
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Brilliant!! Just is wonderful!
You are so gifted and talented!
Best of luck in the contest.
Jeannie
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Reads a bit like the nursery rhyme Man from Saint Ives...love it! Love silliness too, enjoyed this!
galfalfa
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HAHAHAH. this is great!!! super hillarious! i loved how the last word of every line rhymed
plus the part about the little cats having ten different hats was adorable! thanks so much for entering my contest!
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lol!!!!!!
gosh.. that really made me chuckle!
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CHO CHWEET!!
Hey!! i just loved this write!! So tender and sweet!! Brings out the sweeter part of you sweetie!!! I love the rhyming here...so naturally cute!!
I think u did a great work here!!
goood luck!!!!
preets
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Cool
gave me quiet a chuckle indeed~
love all the imagery~the flow~the rhythm was well in tune.Good luck in the contest~
Blessings
~Cheryl~ -
I laughed...
This poem/story is so wacky and darling! Thank you for sharing it with us. 
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