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strung up//let down

you've strung me up
on the paint in your eyes


the orange speckles
blend
into a barf-colored beauty, and I'll ask you just this:


...





will you take the time

to catch me?






.

Author notes

I CAN'T WRITE ON THE SPOT.
errrg.


sorry marcy.

♥
-crash

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  • acqua
    March 8, 2007

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    CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!
    and you didn't think you could do this, but you did and look, Hooray!
    As I said in my comment we can be our own worst critics and I hope this helps you see that you can and did do well in this and I am so glad for you...
    I am also grateful because I felt the same way, but when I read yours, it was soon after that I tried myself...
    ea's contests offer us such inspiration and along with that, you also helped me get going in this too, carcrash, so thank you along with Marcy

    Michele


  • hoodoolover silver member
    March 8, 2007

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    barf colored beauty, LOL, amazing line, and congratulations for the silver,

  • ea silver member
    March 8, 2007

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    I like this one, Crash, but don't tell me who you are next time because I like to be surprized! The barf-colored tabletops in the outdoor cafe are calling me...


    • CarCrashHumor
      March 8, 2007

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      sorrysorrysorry! I forgot >_<... thanks so much for the silver anyways!!

      I was deathly suprised.


  • sweetpearl
    March 7, 2007

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    This is kind of sweet. It's like one of those flowers blooming in a pile of dirt ... I love the ending. I'll catch you, dear.


  • bird-mad girl
    March 7, 2007

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    you know what?... fuck you. seriously. I could NEVER write something LESS than HALF as good as this on the spot.

    okay... I take that 'fuck you' back cuz I love you!


    like everybody else... I L♥VE the ending. talk about make my heart flutter.

    love you babykins <3


  • makeout kid
    March 7, 2007

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    will you take the time

    to catch me?

    a question i keep asking myself.
    lovely.
    love you.


  • micha
    March 7, 2007

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    I can't either very well at ALL, but you have written here and I, like the others love the ending and we are often our own worst critics, y'know?
    I like 'the orange speckles', also and I wish you luck as you've dared to post when you feel this way...
    Best to you! In the contest and all your writings,
    m.
    I wish I had your courage to attempt to write on this spot, you make me want to try,sigh~
    thank you

  • She Stole My Voice
    March 6, 2007

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    Cant write on the spot? Doesnt seem like it to me hun.
    ♥
    I love the ending

    ~Princess of SHadows~

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