The pain a broken heart must bear
A heavy load, no one cares
You feel alone
You feel betrayed
Heart of stone
A game you played
Whispers disappeared that night
Memories under stars took flight
Now crash and burn
A lesson i will never learn
I look down and weep
Hearrt settled into everlasting sleep
Why are you doing this
Inside im dying
One last kiss
"Ill always love you"
Youre lying
Cradle my head in my hands
Tears rip my face like sand
Im just so tired, too weak
World is dark
Eyes leak
The cold wind stings my face
Fragile hands lined with lace
In my hand a single rose
Your body lays in its final pose
It falls to the frozen ground
Barely making a sound
One lone headstone
Now youre the one alone
An eye for an eye leaves the whole world blind
Is one saying, much too kind
Id rather be blind, for revenge is sweet
The score is settled, youve been beat
And now my baby, when push comes to shove
Id rather see you dead then with another love
Reace in peace, you i will miss
Reace in peace, with one last kiss
A contest entry
- && Yet Another Beautiful Disaster♥...please enter. prewrites are okay.. by yesterdaysfeelings-.
385 points, ended March 9, 2007, 22 entries
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This has such good flow, it has the best flow i have read in a while. i enjoyed reading this, thanks for sharing.
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for my purpose: 5
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Aww thanks so much guyssssss<333333
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Emotionally Breathtaking
You actually made me cry....I just broke up with my bf on st. patty's day and this poem describes everything that I feel!
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The rhyme scheme is just incredible. Though at some points the lines seem to end too abruptly for the flow, I can't judge such an amazing piece on something so trivial. Bravo! You have some talent! Good luck in the contests!
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Why are you doing this
Inside im dying
One last kiss
"Ill always love you"
Youre lying
great poem i love that part!! thanks for entering my contest -
Wow. I absolutly love this. Good luck and thanks for entering.
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