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The Problem With Cellphones

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A lesson I did learn
was not to talk as I turn

'Coz I dropped my phone
in the turn it was thrown

I found it the second try
sitting up saw the sky

Now what do I do
Who will come to my rescue

The only one who can
would have to be Superman!

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  • Cinnarry gold member
    March 11, 2007
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    LOLOLOLOL,,very funny


  • Grey Mouser
    March 10, 2007

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    LOL...and the moral to this story kiddies is... cell phones and driving don't mix. Well you must still be up there waiting if the only rescuer that can help is Superman. LOL. Who do you think you are Lois Lane??? Very funny and well written. Thanks for entering into the contest.
    Be well and be blessed,

    Mouser


    • JeannieD Hunter gold member
      March 10, 2007

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      LOL I might be, you never know! Thanks for the great comment.

      Jeannie


      • Grey Mouser
        March 10, 2007
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        heh, well then you just gave away Super's alter ego. James is Superman!!!! at least your Superman.


  • Puppydog gold member
    March 8, 2007

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    ADORABLE!

    This brought a hearty laugh from me You see people always talking on their phones while driving and so many do have accidents.


  • DJ Harley silver member
    March 8, 2007

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    how would like to monkey man to come to your rescue, only payment you need is a few bananas, it gets tiresome doing super hero work. dont think you want me in tights.


    very nice poem.
    John

    • JeannieD Hunter gold member
      March 8, 2007
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      Well somebody has to do the superhero work, coz cheeky musta given me the wrong number and kept superman to herself!!


  • The Poetic Angel
    March 7, 2007

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    actualy yea i have Jeannie lol ...you got a pen n paper there its 0800-999-yell HELPPPPPPPP..gice it a few sec n him will b wif ya lmao


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    March 7, 2007
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    Well the things a girls gotta do to see a man in tights!! Thanks Desire!

    Jeannie


  • Desire gold member
    March 7, 2007

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    Giggles-


    There are the pros and cons for talking and driving..
    Pros is that one can see the world upside from an entirely different perspective
    Cons...having to wait for Superman to come rescue but there are others ahead of You...wanting the same thing

    Loved this one~
    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~

  • The Poetic Angel
    March 7, 2007

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    lol i love this take on the pix..since you dropped your cellphone wud u like me to call superman for u ? good luck in the contest ...... cheeky xXx

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