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Far

One page says it all
it cannot be contained
the fires now burning
my thoughts now deranged

a butterfly flies
a fish swims
a girl cries
noone to hear her whims

You try so hard
to get that far
but in the end
your left with a scar

A scar to remind you
of your lifes past
its always there
to kick you in the ass

you try and try
to let it go
but its still there
like an angel in the snow

disappears next snowfall
reappears cause you make it
and for a long time
you just sit there and fake it

for a long time
it seems to work
then it catches up
and throws you in the dirt

so you try so hard
to do it the right way
but you end up
right where you started

So you tell me
was it really worth it

Please tell me what you think

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  • Sweetangelgrace
    March 11, 2007

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    Vert touching!

    Honestly,I feel for you ,I do....
    Like no matter how hard we try to change the circumstances of life, we keep ending up right back where we started from.... It’s as if some cosmic circus clown has spun a wheel and shouted across the entire universe...
    but but......not the end of the world. Sadness, tears, emptiness and never ending problems is always behind us whereever we go..It can be treacherous and tough. It can be confusing and at times, heartbreaking but we should never stop trying, living, laughing, loving, or learning. Life and love treating us not kind but we have to move on and to continue and if life is tough then we are more tougher....

    GRACE