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My Sister

If you and I were sisters it would be great
maybe we would go fishing and catch some small bait

I know it sounds weriod but hey sisters and have fun
even if we don't really like to play under the sun

We could play ball
we would call

each other sis
and then when you left for camp, I'd miss

you, so much. Your my sister girl
and we are gonna whirl

and still have fun
under this bright sun

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Not one of my bests but hey I tryied

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  • InMemoryofCharlieJr
    March 10, 2007
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    Check out my new series Mind Powers


  • InMemoryofCharlieJr
    March 7, 2007
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    Thank you! Yes there will be memories


  • Spiritvision angel
    March 7, 2007
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    I enjoyed this so much. The memorys of sisters are to be cherished.


  • InMemoryofCharlieJr
    March 7, 2007
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    aww thanks!

    Yea it really is not my best, lol.

    Thanks though for your comment.

    Mem


  • Game Master
    March 7, 2007

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    I could tell it wasn't one of your best, but don't fret about it. I've read much worseGood job and good luck!


  • InMemoryofCharlieJr
    March 7, 2007
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    Awww! Thanks sis. I thought it was kinda lame little kid ryhme but I'm glad you like it


  • Jeneralix
    March 6, 2007

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    I love this!!! Hey sis, this is still great!!! And the rhyming is pretty darn awesome!!!
    <3 Jenerali

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