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It's too bad

It's too bad i dont belong here.
I'm trying too had to fit in,
And it's just not working.
It's too bad they dont like me here.
They think im quiet and sad.
I'm giving them a false image,
And it's too bad they don't see the illusion.
They arent taking the time to see me.
The real me.
Loud, sweet, funny, smart, loving me.
It's too bad they dont know my favorite color,
Or any of the things i've had to deal with.
It's too bad they dont care.
They dont know i'm scared of the dark,
And not ever seeing him again.
They dont know how bad i just want to fit in,
or how much i just want to go back.
They dont know me, My strengths, weaknesses, personality,
They dont know anything about me.
And it's just too bad.

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  • XXBrunettexBarbieXX
    April 23, 2007

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    aww this was such a sad write..i can really relate to what you are saying and feeling..i understand..keep writting your very talented and good luck in the contest

    ~Chrissy~


  • xToxicxCupcakesx
    April 20, 2007
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    Awww this made me sad........I like it! Its good! ♥

  • Bob Fox
    March 15, 2007

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    One can only wish

    Some are blessed , some not. But just to find the comfort in your kind comments can ease a boil that festures. Ty dear poet