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lost in war

Entrenching with an e tool leaves the fool
Protection against fool
Protection needed for war
For a helmet is nothing more
Than an excuse to protect
Brain mater
Because
It doesn’t matter
Nothing does
In these war’s of was
Forever a new cause
Because
We never was
Imperfect
Perfection
Produced
Misdirection
Lost.

Lostinwar.

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  • Dawrion Darklinmoon
    April 27, 2007
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    As always old friend a wounderful write!


  • BlueIsisQueenRaven
    March 9, 2007

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    ~Many scarlet kisses and bites~

    I would say the war is lost or the lost are in the war. And incredible write and most enjoyable to read! I loved how you put the words together in an almost crazed and dazed fashion.

    "Forever a new cause"

    Isnt that the truth of it. Causes that make no sense. They will always be there. Causing wars.

    I loved it.

    Lady Blue~