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[ I don't understand ]

I don't understand
Why I'm living this way
Why I put up with it
Them always fighting
Me always hiding
Ending in screaming 
and walking out

He sits and drowns his troubles in beer
She sleeps or plays games to lose all her fear
I'm caught in the middle

They lean on me
I don't want to help
I want to be a kid
Give me my childhood back

But I know
Hoping is
P
O
I
N
T
L
E
S
S
No hope, it is small
I want this to stop

Why won't it stop
Stop me hiding
Take me out of the dark
They will split for sure

Please tell me what you think

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  • shadowsiren
    March 6, 2007
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    Amazing

    Wow, I love the way that you captured you emotion in this piece, all while laying the details of your story..."He sits and drowns his troubles in beer
    She sleeps or plays games to lose all her fear". Very well done!