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[ I don't know how to say it ]

I don't know how to say it
You know it's true

I don't understand
What am I doing wrong
Why can't I think
Why can't I cry

I want to understand
What am I doing wrong
I try to think of what to do
I can not think at all
I try to think of what to say

Why must I stand so tall
When I feel so small

I don't know how to say it
You know it's true

I don't understand
What am I doing wrong

Please tell me what you think

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  • DarkxxChild
    March 6, 2007

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    A lot of un-needed and unwanted repetition.
    Because this comes across as quite confusing it adds to your own confusion.

    Good job.

    DC