Softly rolling by
Wind blown clouds lose present shape
Finding new form; change
Author notes
Written March 6, 2007
A contest entry
- Haiku Contest!! by KnightOfTheRose.
325 points, ended April 29, 2007, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think,
Comments
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truly beautiful, i just wonder if you'd rather go for a quarter pause comma instead of the half-stop semi-colon in the last line. the second line is phenomenal, it is tough to communicate such a firm idea in any poem, you did it excellently in just three lines.
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nice haiku! clever idea too. i'm surprised you didn't gey gold with it
Silverbutterfly -
I very much enjoyed this haiku, the winds of change is nearing its summit of Autumn to Winter, Good luck in the contest
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awww! that was such a good haiku!!!! I really enjoyed reading this piece!!! it was such a beautifully written haiku!!! thank you sooooo much for entering my contest!! excellent work and the best of luck in it!!!
-Steve-
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