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Shadow of a Gentleman.

While I relax and
watch repeats on T.V
I sense someone listening,
watching silently over me.

As I glance up
to see who is there.
A shadow of a gentleman,
stands upon the stairs.

I look away, then glance once more,
there is no more to see,
only a child's picture on the wall,
bringing back special memories.

Shivers creep down my spine
that sends a chill to my bone.
I feel your presence yet again,
your here visiting my home.

It's a while since you seen me,
but you haven't gone away
I wonder why you visit me,
I don't know what to say.

Still you stand and look at me
just gazing from the stairs.
I'm not sure who you could be,
but I sense a fondness in the air.

The years have rolled by,
still you come to visit me.
I don't sense you are a friend
or foe or even a nobody.

Your here again, on the stairs,
staring down at me.
Your presence sensed, I smile
and say "Hello Grampy."



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Uncle Bud

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  • badddgirl
    May 26, 2007

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    Awesome!

    Ok that gave me goose bumps oh my goodness!

    Is this really true?
    When did you realize it was your "Grampy"?


    • Shadows Mistress
      May 26, 2007

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      Thank you, I'm glad that you liked this, sorry about the goosebumps, lol. Yes, it is true. When I explained to my parents the next day what I seen, my Mum told me - eventually. I've got used to it now, he still visits every so often.
      Thank you for the applause, much appreciated.