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Stepmother

Shame, shame go away
Don’t come again another day

Needles prickle in my mind
Insanity too hard to find

Regretting all and loving none
The time has come to kill my fun

Why do you do so?
Do you get off on woe?

Do you toil just to make my life a living hell?
I won’t answer to that fucking bell!

Be that way, don’t love me, okay
I don’t really give a shit anyway…

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  • fallenangel671
    April 11, 2007

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    i loved this, its just to awesome for words i loved
    Why do you do so?
    Do you get off on woe?
    this was an awesome part and i'd have to say one of my favorite parts of the poem, keep writing!!!!

    ~Ashley~<3


  • Mr Lunar Hyde
    March 8, 2007
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    I like that you rewrite familiar things to make them your own. Good job and I like the pic.

  • PlasticPrecious
    March 7, 2007
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    Thanks!

    you guys are awesome, love ya lots!


  • Deceits Tears silver member
    March 7, 2007
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    WOW ! a little beauty you have here .


  • LadyLavender silver member
    March 6, 2007

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    Wow, this shows talent, I like the comtemparary feel. Very much what alot of people at your age are expereincing.

  • PlasticPrecious
    March 6, 2007
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    thanks!

    ur sweet!


  • Beautyfull-x-Angel
    March 6, 2007
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    this one is my fav so far. can't wait to read your others.

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