A man walked into work one day,
And saw a curious thing...
For on his desk, addressed to him,
Was a round, gold wedding ring.
Aghast with shock he picked it up
And down fluttered a note.
Unfolding it with trembling hands,
He read what she had wrote.
"We've been in love for many years,
But now I think it's time,
For me to ask a daring thing:
My dear, will you be mine?"
Author notes
Just something short and sweet... "short poems"
A contest entry
- I Love Short Poems by silverscent.
430 points, ended March 11, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very nice! I told you not to tell everyone about leaving that ring on my desk, but I suppose I'll let it slide...this time.
Great write, gorgeous.
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This was quite a sweet poem about proposal. The rhyme emphasised the upbeat tone of the poem. It was touhcing, thanks for entering.
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