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Passion and Pleasure

The heat of your gaze
making me sweat with anticipation
The brush of your fingertips
making me shiver with desire
passion and pleasure at its finest

A contest entry

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  • Poetic Aphrodite
    March 11, 2007
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    Thankyou for your beautiful entry, Bella


  • RhiannonMari
    March 6, 2007
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    you talkin to me? lol.... j/k. very nicely done. short and sweet.