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The Sound Of Dreams

Music is like a drug.
A choice,
A solution,
An escape from the pains
Caused by so-called “Reality”
Instilling harmony
Relaxation, for a little while
A Break from the limitations
Of our own mortality,
Hundreds of dollars spent
A day
On something in which
Interest can be so easily lost
Yet I believe it is worth the cost
For the sound of history
The sound of dreams...

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First real piece I ever wrote without rhyming. It's a couple years old, I just found it today, but I love it, so I'm posting it.

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  • PhoenixRising
    April 3, 2007
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    sweet. pure genius

    i love the fact that you think dreams have sounds, and music. wow. deep man.


  • halapalu
    March 8, 2007

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    this is wonderful. everything in it is true. you basically stole the words out of my mind but made them sound better. fantastic job


  • Shadowboxer
    March 7, 2007

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    it didnt rhyme...idk what happened 2 my other comment...but im addin another 1...lol...keep it up man


  • AsTheWorldEnds07
    March 6, 2007

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    thats really cool, baby boy. but, omg...it doesn't rhyme. is it killing you? lol. i like how you incorrperated (thats not spelled right, i know!) your love of music into your love of writing lyrics...but good luck fittin this one to music, haha. "Music is like a drug. A choice, A solution, An escape from the pains Caused by so-called “Reality”". thats my fave part cause it really does work to ease pain and kill reality. another fantastic poem, ethan. i love you!


  • uponmoonlight
    March 6, 2007

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    Hey I absolutely love this one. It's so true, music is a drug and it does ease the pain for a little while. Very awsome! I love your stuff.

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