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I was once a happy man, till I died.

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  • phoenixonfire
    March 15, 2007

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    impactful, as in when you look deeper into the meaning of the work. death is truly feared and life seems to be all right until the feeling of death haunts. well captured.
    thanks for entering and good luck!!!!
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  • suseann
    March 6, 2007

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    The major transition of life.I think of Simone & Garfunkle's song. "The Mother and child reunion" from this. Birth and death uniting mom and child.It's only a motion away.