Your my hope that dreams come true
Who wishes were made for
Your the reason I love you
Will last for evermore
Your the reason flowers grow
What glass slippers were made for
You are why the stars glow
You came through heavens door
You are why my grass is green
Why I was given birth
You are what i've never seen
My heaven here on earth
You are why the sun shines bright
You warm me with your touch
I think your my guiding light
And I love you very much
A contest entry
- FILL ME WITH LOVE(Now accepting Prewrites!) by JoyfulWriter.
450 points, ended March 7, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Beauty In Pain! by bangbaby.
300 points, ended June 18, 2008, 91 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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BREATH TAKING
This is a master piece and you are right I do just love it.Ever word has a feeling of deep love and shareing. I tried to pick a favorite part but I just couldnt, it flowed so well like a soft humming love song
thank you for sharing this with me
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This has proven to be a very blessed piece..captivating the reader into visions of love spoken only through shared heart beats and casting memories into the pockets of someone's soul...to treasure and to be taken out again and again...to remember each facet of you on the pages of my heart...Thanks for entering this in my contest..Good luck! Smiles, Terry
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