From everything I ever wanted to be, to everything I wish I could be again.
A contest entry
- ~~~ONE LINER~~~ #2 by phoenixonfire.
300 points, ended March 15, 2007, 15 entries
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OMG THIS ACTUALLY BROUGHT TEARS TO MY EYES.I SO WANT TO GET WELL SO I CAN BE ALL THE THINGS I DREAMED OF BEING AS A CHILD THIS TOUCHED MY HEART MORE THAN YOU MAY EVER KNOW
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life is funny. at times you do wanna go back to the time which you cherished and be that person u were before and found that to be the most pleasant times!
very nicely put!!
thanks for entering and good luck!!!!
preets
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Insightful words!!!!
Your fifteen words are so profound! I am proud of your achievement with the scholarship. You rock, Sprack!!! "To everything you desire to be, you now have a path to the distance of reality."
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the word's alone speak for themself well done
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A very powerful statement!! There is a lot of deep meaning in the work!! sometimes in life what we were we want to be again!! This is an excellent transition!!!
Thanks for entering and good luck!
preets
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This says so much! Just brilliant. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Jeannie
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Kewl
Wonderfully written great job. Good luck in the contest
*Go with God* my friend,
Valerie
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