Setting aside dreams for thankless progeny, now I want mine.
©2007
3-6-2007
Author notes
Written for the contest: ~~~ONE LINER~~~ #2
ON TRANSITION!! ONE LINE!! by phoenixfromdust
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2342128
A contest entry
- ~~~ONE LINER~~~ #2 by phoenixonfire.
300 points, ended March 15, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
A critical criticism invited.
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WOW!!! That was a very different and an awesome one liner!!
At times with so much love that the parents give for the children with no returns its time to shift to fulfill your own dreams!!!
Awesome work!!
thanks for entering and good luck!!!!
preets
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Amen to that. I am at that point in my life. They are almost all gone, and I am assessing my options.
Thank you for reading and commenting.
rous
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The most thankless work, yet the most rewarding...all rolled into one! Well written.
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Thank you. And, for taking the time to comment.
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Very good.
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