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Just Imagine.....

Just imagine you’re at a roof top party but instead of being in the midst of it all you choose to stand at the edge of the roof and gaze out across the night shrouded city. Everything is black, white and gray just like an old movie, except for the yellow pool of light coming from a lantern to your left.
It’s quite. No noise comes from the party behind you, not from the traffic below or the plane flying overhead. You relish the silence that cushions you. Suddenly the shrill sound of a siren starts to wail; you close your eyes against the sudden on rush of wind. There is a blood-curdling scream of a woman. But before you realize where it’s coming from......you hit the ground.

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Ok, yeh. So not a poem....but I just thought this up and I wanna know what people think.

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  • CazzieJade
    March 6, 2007

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    Ouch!
    That made me want to go jump off a building.
    Okay, seriously that is fucking awesome. I like it although it scared me cause there's a few times i've wanted to do that.