Barely Let Anyone Know Me

I want to be loved by all, but I barely let anyone know me.

A contest entry

~~~ONE LINER~~~ #2 by phoenixonfire. 300 points, ended March 15, 2007, 15 entries
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phoenixonfire
March 15, 2007

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WOW!! Thats such a sad work!!

At times we feel so afraid of life that we cant face it and wont let anyone near us!!

Well penned!!

thanks for entering and good luck!!!!
preets
aboomer
March 7, 2007
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Beautiful! Could go so well with the sentiments in the picture. Good luck in the contest!
tawk
March 6, 2007
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Wow what a true and emotional write Good luck in the contest
Regenhart
March 6, 2007
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I think this is true for a lot of people
Elrenia
March 6, 2007
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My life. Nicely penned, but I have one niggle: the word am. It is not necessary and detracts from your statement.

Otherwise, this is very good.

Well wishes in the contest.
Thank you for sharing.

rou
troyias
March 6, 2007

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Sad
lovely thought but much too sad for one such as you.

Wonderful Job.

*f Valerie