After years of searching in the dark, I now see a white light in the distance.
A contest entry
- ~~~ONE LINER~~~ #2 by phoenixonfire.
300 points, ended March 15, 2007, 15 entries
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Searching for peace and happiness!!
I am glad u found that one!! A hope filled and a tender write!!
Way to go!!
thanks for entering and good luck!!!!
preets
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awesome contrast and metaphors...dark/light...despair/hope...good job! Liking your stuff!
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This is really good. Sometimes it's so hard to see those white lights but sometimes they do come to us at the right time. Good luck in the contest.
Kari -
Years of being in the dark, I now see a glimmer of light.....(my translation)
Don't want you reaching for that other white light, just yet!
Nice sentiment, good line.
Wish you well.
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You and me both. So few words, one definitive sentence and you have summed up an awful number of peoples lives.
Goos luck in the contest...Sue
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lol you sure enter alot of comps just like me lol but i like this one line poem its good and makes you think gd luck
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Deep sense of hope, for one who has also wondered in the dark for too long. Always searching and reaching for the light.
Well done, my friend!
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