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Till I Fall Asleep

My heart is beating quiet in the dark,
Sleepless, I talk to my God,
Tell him all about my woes.
Thank him for his tender mercies,
And the love he gives each day.
What a wonder and delight he is,
And a joy to my very world.
And in the dark silences...
I know that My Father is listening,
Intently to his child,
He cradles me in his arms,
Until I fall asleep.

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short poems

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  • silverscent gold member
    March 11, 2007

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    This was quite inspirational. I'm not a religious person, but this really touched me. It contained a sincerity that anyone can relate to, despite religious beliefs. Thanks for entering.


  • Heavens Child
    March 6, 2007
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    Oh, this is really sweet. Very good write. The picture is awesome.


  • Regenhart
    March 6, 2007

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    yeah, I do that too sometimes
    It is truly is a lovely feeling, isn't it?