Why,
Why is life so backwards
Why is it those who want kids don't get them?
Why is it those who don't want kids get five?
Why is it the good get murdered?
Why is those with something to say
Don't get to say it why is it?
And those without
something to say are heard?
Why is it that those
Without a message are heard?
Why is it there's no love?
Why is it that man can't love?
Why is it the one who was and is perfect died?
Why is it we are so backwards?
Why is it we can't say
Whats on are minds?
Why is it good people
Are pushed to suicide?
Why is it evil runs through are world?
Why is it the good hide?
Why was it the good never came out
Until one man came
One man balancing the mistakes
And the rights,
Saving lives,
Healing the sick,
Cleansing the hearts of the evil,
Making them pure,
Making them whiter
Then snow so white spiritually,
That if it were a physical color
It would be blinding.
A man perfect,
Without flaw holy godly
Son of the living God
And in him he over came death
And in resurrection
Brought life eternal life,
Life after death,
Life without sorrow,
Life without pain,
Life with love,
life thats not backwards.
Author notes
Thank you Lord you've been so good to me and I thank him for it. everyone meet the Lord and you will never want to leave and he will never leave you.
Please tell me what you think
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very good hun.the author note is very true.He will never leave!!!
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C'est est trés bon!(this is very good)
Wow! this poem is so awesome! IT speaks a lot of truth is the form of so many questions. Most of these are those that have yet to be answered. The only good thing to come of this is that Christ did what no one could do: set us free from our sins and all of our iniquities! Overcoming death, taking the keys of Hades and Death from Satan Himself, and allowing us to live as one with Him! Totally awesome and amazing! Thanks for sharing this! God bless!
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Excellent!!!!
You need to use the spell check. But besides that it's a poem thats beutiful. It lets you Know that someone can drag you " down, down, to the depths of sound". It shows that there is good and bad in this world. that you shoud be happy with what you have cuz, it might be gone before you know it. Good work keep it up! I hope to see more soon.
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wow. some well caught satire.
Could do to have punctuation and lines
But fairly passable none-the-less
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please enjoy my poetry tell me about any mispells and the words that would help out a lot
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