I'm finding that it hurts to think
of what you've done.
So much that I'm half tempted
to just pack up and run.
I had never seen you
before that dreadful day.
I haven't seen you since,
If I did I'd run away.
You had no right
to hurt me like you did.
You had no consideration.
You know, I'm just a kid.
Permanently now, I'm scared.
Inside and also out.
You've left me with this nightmare,
and now I can't get out.
I'm trapped and crying,
and no one seems to care.
For they don't know what you did.
How could they? They weren't there.
I hope that you feel bad,
that you see that you were wrong.
From this I have realized
that you're weak and I am strong.
Author notes
When things like this happen it's hard to heal.. it hasn't been long, but thanks to one friend in particular (the only person who knows exactly what happened) I'm feeling a little better.
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this was great i could just almost picture the emotion rising in your chest is wasvery well conveyed thank you for entering the contest
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it was sad and painfun and touched my emotions a lot !! i just love the way your write brought the emotion into me ! i just loved this !!
I hope that you feel bad,
that you see that you were wrong.
From this I have realized
that you're weak and I am strong.
these lines rocked !!
thank you so much for entering and best wishes in the contest ,
your well wisher ,
-truthwriter-
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Very well done. I especially like the ending. Goodluck and thanks for the entry.
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writing about it helps to heal also. thank you for entering the contest and best of luck to you
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This is an excellent release of feelings and emotion. I feel your pain and wish I could make it stop. I am here for you and I care.
Wyatt xoxox
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