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An unDiscovery

you stayed awake with me at night to help me go to sleep
I never understood the worries you felt and the darkness you could see
can you figure of all the things we did together you never gave me a second chance
I recently discovered all the papers and poems you’ve been hiding this whole time
she laid there innocently well her mother prayed at night
thy kept his word that he’d always be by my side
one day you left and broke my heart
I can tell you isn’t who you used to be
my father is a bird, who watches over me
she used to beat you but now she’s gone
I cant ever tell you how much pain I felt that Sunday afternoon
last weekend you congratulated me and all I said was thank you
the night is slowly drifting away and I can hear your voice
my friend said softly “here he is”
my deepest and darkest secret will never be reveled
his innocence reminds me of the day she was born
kill him now so he can never tear us apart again
return to that destination so I can feel your strength
the story was quite over as soon as it began
she told me he was sorry and I told him to hold my hand

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  • in-the-twilight
    March 5, 2007

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    This is cute sweetie! I like it a lot... so beautiful and full of emotion! AMazing flow! Rock on! xoxo mEg