On my arm, are the scars to prove that I need you.
In my heart, your name is engraved with love.
In my mind, your image is sketched to perfection.
What happened to 'Happily Ever After'?
In my eyes, the weakness is shown.
In the mirror, my beauty is fading with time.
In my head, demons show me what I lost.
What happened to Forever?
In my memories, we were always happy.
In my eyes now, we seem to just always fight.
And now... these self inflicted scars are 'cause of you.
And I can't deal with this pain you've left me in.
And now I'm wallowing in self pity... praying to place the slashes in my wrists.
What is the reason you are ignoring me?
Why don't you return my messages?
Do you now hate me?
Please say no....
Author notes
Contest:
Scars
Heart
Pain
Engraved
Mirror
Pain
Perfection
Happily Ever After
Beauty
Demons
Forever
Memories
Self inflicted
Weak(ness)
Self pity
Slashes
Also, I used the title Saying Goodbye.
A contest entry
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A very emotion poem, filled with many different feelings. i can feel alot from this poem, so much raw emotion is envading my soul. Great job. Good luck.
~Oka
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This is a very sad write, i really feel your pain and your longing it is really expressed really well in this poem. I am sorry that you are feeling so bad though I hope that you feel better. Great job Godmum
-Ur Goddaughter
-Kate- -
wow i really feel your longing for the person in your poem. very deep and very nice. i love it. thanks for entering and good luck.
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That's so... So sad. You know... I don't know him. I don't know who it is you speak of. But whoever, he isn't worth your blood. You're way better than anyone who would give you such grief. I'm sorry you're so full of pain...I hope some time you can be happy.
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this is so sad! I am sorry you are having such a hard time. Happily ever after just doesen't exist in todays society does it?
If he doesen't even have the decency to talk to you than he probably wasn't the best guy for you in the first place. I know taht thought probably isn't much help to you right now though.
*curls up in your lap*
I hope you feel better soon! If you ever need to talk I am here for you. -
Ashleigh, I know how you feel. And I feel so bad. It suks when the person you need isn't there to pick up the phone or im you. Not having contact even a slight hello hurts. I've been thru this many times and the person i'm with now its a constant struggle. when i need him the most he's not there and I can tell how his non-contact is affecting you. Ashleigh hold your head up. Listen to me..no guy is worth the tears. if they cause you to cry their not worth loving. Love shouldn't hurt. Remember that display? I never forget about it. Hold your head up soldier..your baby's here to hold you!
Love your baby
Remember Mommy I'm always here!!!
Mandi
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