Pink
swirls
of passion
penetrate the heart
in perfect rhythmn.
A contest entry
- tell me in ten words by Lavender Butterfly.
380 points, ended March 5, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very nice.
I like the alliteration here.
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A Diamond in ten. Perfection --- thenak you.
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naya will agree with you on this.you have said so much about the color pink in ten wonderful words.now that's the true heart of a real poet.my best to you in the contest.
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A wonderful set of 10. Best wishes in the contest.
Sam
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Beautiful colour, terrific wording.
Thanks for sharing.... x
Love and light,
Butterfly.
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