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When I close My eyes

When I close my eyes
I can see
All that is inside of me
All that falls apart
All that wants to cry
But can not make a sound
when I close my eyes
I am alive

Take me to the river
Take me to the sea
I want to bathe
this anguish
this feeling of despair
away

so it will never come back
never haunt me
never take me hostage
with no chance of freedom
never to imprison me
with no hope of parole

When I close my eyes
I am alive

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