A flower’s nectar
captivates the butterfly
as our lips met
with a passionate sigh.
Comforts felt
from each other’s breath
while we safely rest
within our arms’ wreath.
Submission and trust
as the mute wins,
then our voice conceded
as the kiss begins.
Ecstatic hearts
gracefully flutter
and sweet words of love
we silently utter.
Feelings drowned,
deafened by the euphoria.
Our hearts beckoned to surrender
towards lovers' enigma.
A contest entry
- Kiss Me by .
450 points, ended March 6, 2007, 8 entries
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great
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a silent kiss, but only the kisser knows how strong he/she feels. this piece brings life to kiss, i can feel the intimacy and closeness. romantic, beautiful.. a silent kiss is inaudible but at the same time it is deafening to the heart. nice work.
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Lovely
this is beautiful work,
very well writen with great flow and delightful metaphor -
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Thank you.
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