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Mumma (Rictameter) :)

Mumma
I love you so
More than you love me too
I will always be there for you
I know you will always be there for me too
So mumma when you read this write
No matter where you are
You will have me!
Mumma

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I'm 10

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  • mystic-angel
    October 28, 2007

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    This is wonderful. I've never done a rictameter before and you make it look effortless. Well done on the HM.


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    October 28, 2007
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    this is a nice poem for your mumma great write congrats on the honorable mention


  • RIP Whoever
    April 15, 2007
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    oo that's so nice of you.
    most of us feel this way but only say it like on mother's day


  • Justified Inc.
    March 29, 2007

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    Awwwwwwwwwww........

    Gemma, this is really good!
    I bet your mum was so happy! Good luck in the contest!
    Miss you!
    Auntie C!!


  • honey bear
    March 13, 2007

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    good luck in the contest and thank you for entering with this delightful dedication to your mother


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    March 6, 2007
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    Beautiful!

    This is just such a gorgeous poem about your love for your mother. It was wonderful to read. Sometimes I think many take their mother's for granted. But It sounds like you will always be her very best friend
    Great write! Good luck in the contest
    Mum xxxxx

    Gaylene

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