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Worked to the bone

Wanting some rest, the toil of life goes on
Over and over again...he's worked to the bone
Remembering long ago, what it took to survive
Kindness was the only thing he wanted to earn
Especially when he didn't care about the price
Day and night working...much to his own chagrin

This went on and on...days turned into months
Over the course of time, he's been forgotten

Terrible misfortunes confronted him and still he worked
Holding onto only one ideal, there was a price to pay
Eternally locked in dispute, and now the piper calls

Before too long, even he's forgetten why he toils
Of the many ironies of life, his was taken for granted
Now not only has time been wasted, but he's lost all heart
Especially when he was worked to the bone, there's nothing left

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  • Lyre-Bird-
    March 9, 2007

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    Thank you for entering the contest!!!!!!

    Hope you have enjoyed the contest as much as we have enjoyed reading your entry

    Best of Luck
    Tracey


  • PerfectImperfection
    March 8, 2007
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    Good luck to you in this contest; thank you for your entry!


  • Desire gold member
    March 5, 2007
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    Wow-

    Powerful verse You have penned my Friend
    What images You present that gives the reader much to think about~
    You are so good at Acrostic~
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent~

    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~