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~Let me carry this burden~

How can you want me to hurt this much?
My darkened heart turned innocent again
Fear not my love, the light that leads you in the darkness
The flame of my heart, blown out

Lying, Darling, don't decieve me
I'll brave the thorns for you
Lacrymose, Sobbing Silently through this storm
Still in the dark is this love true?

Why must you hate me so much?
My broken heart, not only broken now
But turned to dust
Fear not my love, fear not, I am here for you
Here with you

Lying, Darling, don't decieve me
(Can't you remember my love?)
I'll brave the thorns for you
(conquer the storm for you)
Lacrymose, Sobbing Silently through this storm
(Don't cry for a fake love lost)
Still in the dark is this love true?
(And hear me...can you hear me?)

Can you remember my love?
Don't mourn for a fake love lost

~Let me carry this burden~

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  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    April 11, 2007
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    Can you remember my love?
    Don't mourn for a fake love lost
    ~Let me carry this burden~

    those lines really reached me for personal reasons. great job on this write and i would like to congratulate you on the bronze trophy you have earned in this contest. viyanna rosemarie


  • fire angel 088
    March 23, 2007
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    dude

    im trying to make u win but.. i have to work alittle more on it... even though.. ur mom
    kaite


  • fire angel 088
    March 5, 2007
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    hehe

    you might... possible....maybe.... win... just maybe
    ur mom
    eye heart u
    Kaite